Friday, 1 February 2008
A Lover.. or..
I saw you winking down at me,
enticing tempting scaring me..
With a twinkle of your eye,
you seemed to invite me to fly..
You promised to give me the ride of my life,
comfort and pleasure and freedom from all strife..
Zooming up zipping around,
dipping in and out of every cloud..
The symphony of your voice i could hear,
clearer every second as you drew near..
With a mischievous grin and a teasing whistle,
you left my senses in a tussle..
Alas! your speed soon took you out of my sight,
gone you were in a jiffy, my airplane in the night..
love luck hugs and looooooooads of kisses *muaah* *muaah*
and yes of course a truck full of buzzzzzzzesssss!!!
#queen bee# :D :D :D
PS: will surely reply to all the comments of that depressing post i wrote yesterday.. but today i really am neither in the mood nor do i have time.. please bear with me :D
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Alas! your speed soon took you out of my sight,
gone you were in a jiffy,
my airplane in the night..
and then i saw u again..
on the horizon back in my sight.
u made me wonder u made me smile...
n i was back again dreaming in the starry night
jus made it up :D
haha, same here.....i m in no mood to write long comments or reply either.......
take care and be happy
Wah Wah Wah!
Good work from queen bee that!
hmm.... hehe nice one beeeeeeeee,,
nice one queenie!
i liked it...
@maverick.. ahaan
good to know i can still make u write poetry and it was great as always.. thank you :)
and you get a special hug for that one
*huggggg* :D
@ashu lol
thanks.. you too be happy and take care :)
@skeeter
thankuuuuu
and that earns you a buzz
#buzz buzz# :D
@shashi
thanks Dr. saab :D
@d sinner
thanks :)
@umang...thanks for the hugg...tht was sweet..n now i want my HCF...u owe me.. :D
lolz... vry cheeky...
hehe! :D That was a good one Queen Bee! :D
lol!
-Jeevy
@maverick.. definitely, next time you are in the vicinity, just tell me in time, so that I can fit you into my schedule ;) :D
@bubbles of firewhisky
lol
thanks :D
@jeevy
thank u :)
hehe sucha cute post, loved the airplane pic...took me back to my jigsaw puzzle book which had a similar puzzle pic :)
lol.. really?
I had one with an airplane too..
got it in a KLM flight years ago :)
thanks :)
lovely words...you have crafted it beautifully!
madamoiselle... i did tell u in time..just tht this mode of communication can have huge amounts of time lag...i hope u get wat i m saying..so shift to a better mode... n lemme knw :)
@kalyan
thanks :)
@maverick
lol
u won't give up would u
cool give me your gtalk id i'll add u :D
@lol..see im an engineer..n so r u..n i can logically defend my stand on the communication thing :D
if u ld like to debate on tht..we can do it on either of our blogs :)...
leaving the id on ur shoutbox...tke ur call
@maverick na i get your point.. no need for a debate.. will add u asap
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