Friday, 15 February 2008
Tryst with the sea..
The sand looked inviting, the white foam at peace,
as it came out to touch me, it was soft as fleece.
I saw the satin ribbons, disappear beneath my feet,
i saw myself through the eyes, of the ocean's wild fleet.
The sand the salt the warmth, the flowing cold,
they washed over me as I waded deeper, stronger, feeling bold.
A shiver of doubt, a moment of fear,
as the ocean claimed me, the green got near.
A spluttered breath, a useless struggle
a liquid scream, a solid gurgle.
and then.. then silence
The silence that only the thunderous sea holds,
as the waves crushed my ears, in a million folds.
The salt balmed my smoldering wounds,
the air rushed out, like chased hounds.
I was helpless, floating, defeated, tossed around,
and yet, never a sweeter victory had i ever found.
As i surrendered myself to the mercy of the sea,
I finally tasted the freedom that eluded me..
I finally tasted the freedom that eluded me..
PS: buzz buzz everyone.. the queen bee is back from her little break.. back from sun and sea.. back into the payjama clad, quilt covered, shivering world of Delhi..
sorry i am in a bit of a hurry today, have two tests snarling at me and haven't even started studying.. will be back tomorrow evening with a good sniff of the sea..
till then its hugs kisses and buzzes all the way..
#Queen Bee#
PPS: and by the way.. "MERA BUDDAY BAS AA HI GAYA!!! YUHOOOO!!!" :D :D :D
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12 comments:
hey grl...Happy birthday (i am sure u gonna read this tmrw)
gud to c u back....delhi's shiverin still???
the poem is awesome...hw i wud love to be that person surrendrin myslef to the sea...tch tch...but m nt that lucky hn....
:D make a wish...(fatafat se)
wo...dont tell me an attempted suicide bid gone wrong was the inspiration for this pome!!!
jokes apart, this was wonderful!!!
wowie i relived my only time at the sea...this was beautifulll :)
and loadsa love in advance for the big day!
Oye budday aa riya he to party bhi banti he dene ki.....how r ur exams going ?
acche se dena exams!!!!!!
beautifully done... btw - happy budday in advance...
Happy Birthday Lady! :D
-I
@ sinner
thank u soooooo much girl
yeah though its better than how i left it
koi na I hope u too get the chance to do it.. it was very soothing :)
tc
@humble devil
no it was no suicide attempt... but really what a way to end your life if u want to..hmmm...
and thanks :)
@vandy
thanksssssssssss :)
@ashu.. lol.. exms :sigh: just sessionals the and bina pade jaise jate hn waise hi gaye :D
@firewhisky
thanks and thanks :)
tc
@impressionist
thanks :)
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