There's a dead rose on my table
withered and burned..
There's a dead rose on my table
bent and forlorn.
Empty of life
a symbol of loss..
Empty of life
a piece of my soul.
withered and burned..
There's a dead rose on my table
bent and forlorn.
Empty of life
a symbol of loss..
Empty of life
a piece of my soul.
Its autumn folds
so silent and dead..Its autumn folds
so dark and depressed.A reminder of my mistakes
a breath of my past..
A reminder of my mistakes
the past you forgot so fast.
In a cracked plastic bottle
it stands there aloof..In a cracked plastic bottle
i can feel it accuse.It screams with its silence
to let the gone go..It screams with its silence
the truth i already know.I look at it every day
thinking "i'll throw it today"..
I look at it every day
finding a new excuse to let it stay.
In the depths of its dead swirls
i want to smell the scent long gone..In the depth of its dead swirls
i look, for the love no more.There's a dead rose on my table
getting deader by the day..There's a dead rose on my table
telling me the pain is here to stay.
25 comments:
just to add to the poem...
"theres a new rosebud on the plant saying..
come smell my lovely fragrance...
theres a new rosebud on the plant..
saying...
life always has something new to offer..."
im no poet..so excuse the rhyming absence.. :)
@maverick
thanx...that was very sweet and the absence of rhyme didn't make it any less beautiful :)
well the intention was to make u look at another angle...hope i did that :)
Awesome piece of poetry with such deep meaning!
Sweetie,just throw it away.It does not do to dwell in the past...Hugsss
@maverick
yes u did indeed :)
@sameera
thank you though this work is not among my personal favourites i am afraid...had been languishing in my drafts unfinished for quite a while
i don't know why i bothered to complete it
and the rose..yes i will throw it away..soon i hope
totally agree with maverick...
"Empty of life
a symbol of loss..."
why not a symbol of the happy memories it has?
hugs...
no use telling you to throw away anything...
we all need time....take your time to let go...
life is a long journey...people come and go...no use brooding...use that time to enjoy the scenery...
hola... beautiful poem... reminded me of a dead rose lyin between the pages of my diary... tc babe... cheers!
@firewhisky
well, i tried looking for the happy memories in its dead folds
but they seem to be getting fainter by the day too..
:)
*hugs back*
@humble devil
well as i said its a reminder of the past
standing testimonial to the fact that people come and go leaving just dead memories behind and a pain that never really dies..
@shimmer
aaah..of roses and diaries...what can i say.. :)
and yes thanks for the wonderful comment :)
nice one again, commensurate lovely use of words
@lucifer
thanx :)
kya mast likha hai... lovely!!
kudos to u...
P.S. I neva knew ur voice sounded so sweeet ;)
I like it :) Nicey nicey! :D Cheers!
@soup
thanks :)
P.S. how sweet of you to say that :)
@reeta
thanks :)
nice poems umang... lotta feelings in the poem... btw nice blog...tc
@shashi
thanks :)
and keep visiting :)
Lovely flow :)
fantastic piece of work.....cant nearly put up words to define it.....out of words....thts da fact.....really touchy....if u ve a fan club......count me in....
@gonecase
thanks :)
@slayer
that sounds too good :)
thanks a lot..feels great to know what i write could touch your soul
and fan club..lolzz..i don't think i am that great :D but thanks for stopping by :)
a nice one.... pictured and versed so beautifully...
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